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Post by ADH7901 on Oct 20, 2003 15:42:43 GMT -5
I got one out of the only 2 "A"s she gave in the class!!! Now keep in mind I'm a 16 year old in a college class with college students!! Here are her comments on my essay...they completely blew me away! I don't think my essay is good at all...it's about growing up gay and christian. Here are her comments: "Chris - Forgive my lack of comments in the margins; when essays are this good, I don't stop for grammar or commas or even to say, 'Wow, this is great.' When it's so captivating that I can't wait to keep reading more, I don't wait. i just read to the end and sit in awe. Your essay is beyond good; it's powerful, lively, highly aritculate, and precise. Simply, it hits the nail on the head. Interested in trying to publish? ...See me if you are. A"  OMG I'm so happy right now! ;D LOL  |
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Post by LuvLiyah4life on Oct 20, 2003 16:21:50 GMT -5
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Post by Krissy2003 on Oct 20, 2003 16:48:06 GMT -5
AWWWW! Chris Congrats! WOW GET IT PUBLISHED!!  |
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Post by EternalFlame7901 on Oct 20, 2003 17:46:24 GMT -5
I got one out of the only 2 "A"s she gave in the class!!! Now keep in mind I'm a 16 year old in a college class with college students!! Here are her comments on my essay...they completely blew me away! I don't think my essay is good at all...it's about growing up gay and christian. Here are her comments: "Chris - Forgive my lack of comments in the margins; when essays are this good, I don't stop for grammar or commas or even to say, 'Wow, this is great.' When it's so captivating that I can't wait to keep reading more, I don't wait. i just read to the end and sit in awe. Your essay is beyond good; it's powerful, lively, highly aritculate, and precise. Simply, it hits the nail on the head. Interested in trying to publish? ...See me if you are. A" OMG I'm so happy right now! ;D LOL OMG! *tries to spin Chris around but realizes she's too much of a weakling* *big hug* I LOVE YOU! I'M SOOOO PROUD OF YOU! I'm also completely... not surprised-LOL! I knew you were capable of wowing a college professor. You can wow anyone, I hope you know that...  GO, CHRIS! GO, CHRIS! |
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Post by ADH7901 on Oct 20, 2003 18:47:13 GMT -5
aaawwww thanks you guys! you make me feel even happier about this!!! you guys are so sweet and supportive! THANK YOU!! ;D |
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Post by ADH7901 on Oct 20, 2003 21:35:46 GMT -5
aaawwww thanks you guys! you make me feel even happier about this!!! you guys are so sweet and supportive! THANK YOU!! ;D PS - yes you did tell me anny and thanks for the compliments krissy and amanda! pps - amanda...you're no weakling!  |
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Post by LiLisAnAngel on Oct 20, 2003 21:42:23 GMT -5
Hey chris! I swear i replied to this wtf lol Anyway-- I'm so proud of you sweetie! I told u! ur a good writer  You should get it published or something Im so happy you did so well! |
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Post by ADH7901 on Oct 20, 2003 21:43:12 GMT -5
Good job chris! I'm so happy and proud of you!!!!!!! See I told u, ur an awesome writer! Yaaaaaaaaaaaaay!!!! ;D hehe |
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Post by LiLisAnAngel on Oct 20, 2003 21:43:57 GMT -5
ok my comp is retarded. it wont show wat i post or anything. it crashed and everything deleted yesterday now its being stupid |
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Post by ADH7901 on Oct 20, 2003 21:47:33 GMT -5
ok my comp is retarded. it wont show wat i post or anything. it crashed and everything deleted yesterday now its being stupid awww  i'm sorry  |
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Post by LuvLiyah4life on Oct 21, 2003 4:19:32 GMT -5
wohooo!!! ;D ;D ;D ;D
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Post by ADH7901 on Oct 21, 2003 9:07:46 GMT -5
I'm so happy about it!
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Post by LuvLiyah4life on Oct 21, 2003 9:37:23 GMT -5
I'm so happy about it! I'm sooooooooooooooo happy for you!!!! |
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Post by ADH7901 on Oct 21, 2003 9:50:02 GMT -5
I'm sooooooooooooooo happy for you!!!! thanks baby! |
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Post by LuvLiyah4life on Oct 21, 2003 9:51:52 GMT -5
thanks baby! ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D |
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OMG I'm so happy right now! ;D LOL 
I'm SO proud of you, baby!!! ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D 
i'm sorry 